Feedback and Revision

After review and critique, my team and I have decided on a few different ways in which we can improve the quality of our film. While it was not the most enjoyable of events to pick apart our film, it was a useful exercise for my team and I. After revision, we have decided that we need to alter our film in three main ways

First, we need to standardize our use of cameras. Throughout the film we chose to use different cameras to try and get different angles and different types of shots. This caused the quality of our film to vary from shot to shot. In order to fix this issue we need to standardize and use a single camera.

Secondly, we need to standardize the audio of our film and correct the areas where we had issues with it. During the editing we found out that the audio of one of our scenes was corrupted, and we put in a placeholder for our midterm submission. We will go back to our filming location to rerecord and correct our audio.

Finally, we need to make our plot a bit more coherent. While we were deliberately keeping the plot of the film vague in order to create more intrigue and suspense.  However, we accidentally compromised the coherency of our film by making it too vague.